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|  | Dreams That Never Come « Thread Started on Aug 29, 2006, 9:41am » | |
Dreams That Never Come
The rain is gently falling I can no longer sleep
Sweet words of lost tomorrow Sorrow dark and deep
Clinging to her footsteps Her gentle distant breath
I cannot be this lonesome I can believe she left
Over ten years have come and gone now A time it does not seem
I want to be with you now If only in a dream
I dream of falling raindrops A lover’s soft embrace
I dream of seeing you again With every breath I waste
Come back to me my love I’m not done with my mistakes
-not this time-
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|  | Re: Dreams That Never Come « Reply #1 on Aug 31, 2006, 10:18pm » | |
Thanks for the poem . I found it sad and haunting but peaceful in a strange way .
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|  | Re: Dreams That Never Come « Reply #2 on Sept 23, 2006, 8:43pm » | |
That's very good. Very powerful. Thks for sharing that with us.
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|  | Re: Dreams That Never Come « Reply #3 on May 18, 2008, 8:30pm » | |
this was posted a long time ago but it say everything i'm feeling today....
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|  | Re: Dreams That Never Come « Reply #4 on Aug 30, 2009, 1:51am » | |
Wow, this is really good. I found it hautingly beautiful. It has that really dark feel to it, yet somehow it seems there's a little light.
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